for free writing i wrote about the forever forest hope you enjoy
once apon a time a high school went on a camp in a random
forest.what they didn't now 3 people at that forest. they set up there tents in a wide open area two of the teens was sent to get fire would then one the teen saw a object he followed it, it stooped and made a sinister noise he ran away and told his friend, they both ran the other boy looked behind his friend was missing
Monday, March 4, 2019
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I love your use of sinister in this text! What a fabulous word!! Maybe next time you could try add a few more adjectives (describing words) to help the reader get a picture in their mind. Great work Ryker.
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