Monday, February 25, 2019

ghost mates

On Monday morning we do free writing about anything this is not true story


A rapper x died June the 18. a boy named Ryker always relaid on him, so he starting listing to his music every day, every time at school, then November 2018 he saw shadow. Then Ryker got scared but then it x Ryker stared hulling,and they became mates. Ryker was in shock, he couldn't believe it but it was true.then Ryker stared telling his friends they didn't believe him he said " i swear"

2 comments:

  1. This is a very interesting idea for a story, becoming friends with a spirit. Not many people would believe this idea if they were told it. Try to give your characters names to help the reader follow the story more easily.

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