one monday we where free writing.
on the holidays i mostly played fortnite with Noah. there a new mode on fortnite that i always play now because there is storm breaker aka thors hamma iron man gloves and hawk guys bone arrow and caption america my favorite part in end game fortnite is when you can kill enemies with the weapens
i like how you put a photo in to show us what your writing about and this is a good peice so by
ReplyDeletei i like how you put in the new fortnite endgame and i like how you played with your. Best friend on the game mode suck that i was in the south so i couldn't play with you. But at least you had fun if you want you can go and check out my blog maxh.blogspot.com
ReplyDeleteKi ora its V.J from Tautoro. I like that you were explaining how you were playing Fortnite because thats my favourite game too. But when you write I's you have to put them in capitals. And after fullstops you put them in capitals and when spelling names they have capital letters and Captain america needs to be spelled like this Captain America. Check out my blog http://tsvictorjc.blogspot.co.nz/
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ReplyDeleteHi my name is Noah from kawakawa primary. I really like your fortnite story and to see that i was in it! It was really fun to play fortnite with. Maybe next time you can add full stops and more writing but overall it’s a perfect piece of writing
ReplyDeleteBut until we meet again
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